When I first expressed to my parents the shear terror I felt
about writing this blog, they simply laughed and said, “But you always loved
writing!” I tried to explain to
them that this simply was not true, but they insisted. In an effort to prove their point, they
began sending writing samples they had saved of my work over the years. One in particular made me smile because
it was the exact same assignment that my own students had been tasked with this
fall – an “I Am” poem.
The “I Am” Poem, from little Lori (Cwayna) Smith:
I am Lori Cwayna
I am hopeful and
playful
I wonder if I will get
good grades
I hear a fish singing
I see a unicorn
I want a telephone in
my room
I am hopeful and
playful
I pretend that I am
very rich
I feel sad when my dog
runs away
I touch my cat
I worry about my
Grandma’s back
I cry at sad movies
I am hopeful and
playful
I understand why we
have volcanoes
I say we should keep
our country free
I dream I have a horse
that turns into a unicorn
I try to make a goal at soccer
I try to make a goal at soccer
I hope that I get a
hamster
I am hopeful and
playful
Maybe I didn’t always fear writing after all...
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Ok kiddos, and Miss Collins, if 10 miles equals 6.2 kilometers, how many kilometers are in 40 miles?
It's 24.8
ReplyDeleteThe answer is 24.8 I always thought writing was bad as well but it seems fine now
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so just out there. You just got right to the point. It seems like you loved animals. I have one question. How often did you dog run away? I had to comment the answer before Bobby. So, all you have to do is 6.2*4 because 40/10=4.
ReplyDeleteI know. It was pretty random, huh? I never claimed to a be a good writer! Lol! And I have no clue how often the dog ran away. Frankly, I don't remember the dog ever running away. Oh well! The mind of a child...
DeleteI think the answer is 24.8 but I am not sure. Is your poem from the eyes of when you were little? Either way it is really good.
ReplyDeleteWow, you are a really good author Mrs. Smith! And the answer to your question is 24.8 kilometers.
ReplyDeleteThat's funny
ReplyDeleteAnswer: 24.8
I really liked your "I am" poem.It was quite interesting.I love unicorns.
ReplyDeleteUnicorns are the best! ;)
DeleteI really liked your "I am" poem.It was quite interesting.I love unicorns.
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting I Am Poem. I liked though. See writing isnt that bad.
ReplyDeleteGee, I don't know. It's still pretty tough for me!
DeleteThat was an interesting I Am Poem. I liked though. See writing isnt that bad.
ReplyDeleteHaha. That's funny. The answer is 24.85484.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your I am poem you did really good !
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